A mobile phone is a communication device invented in the 21st century to ease communication among humans. Indeed the mobile phone has changed man's communication experience and is radically changing our lifestyles as well. Prior to the advent of the mobile phone technology, communication by phone has always been for as far as the physical cables can get. That is what guarantees that you can hear the voice of the person at the other end.
The advantages of mobile telephone are enormous. First, users no longer need to get home or to a phone booth before an urgent call can be made, It has now become possible to be accessed anywhere real time, second, the device is becoming lighter and more portable and convenient hence, you can carry your phone comfortably in your pocket, inside your bag or even gang it around the waist. Third, mobile phones have become so stylish that a good one now makes a fashion statement, Fourth, the introduction of the mobile phone have technically eliminated the clumsy wires of the old telephones with tangles that have for years made our environment ugly. Finally, mobile phones today do more than just :phoning" somebody. It now has features that permits the user to exchange sms, it comes with cameras where pictures and videos can be exchanged as part of information sharing. There is the beautiful feature called GPS for location tracking. The gaming apps make mobile phones a relaxation appendage, social media apps and internet communication also allows the user to collaborate with others across the globe. The GPRS feature could be used to track criminals in crime fighting.
Despite the numerous advantages,the mobile phone has some drawbacks. First is the tendency to be addicted to its use. The device is so captivating that if care is not taken, one might get hooked and be distracted. Second is the issue of the batteries that need to be recharged almost all the time before the use can be guaranteed. This means it is possible to have a good phone but be unreachable if the battery is dead. Third, to be reachable, the holder of a mobile phone must be where the service provider network coverage is available else, the device will not have the requisite signal for communication. Fourth, the GPRS feature of the mobile device can give up a persons location and make it possible for criminals to track and attack innocent people.
I believe with more campaigns and awareness about the effects of abuse of this wonderful device, the disadvantages can be reduced gradually because from my view, there a lot more to be achieved with the mobile phone than its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...feature could be used to track criminals in crime fighting while sms allow users ...
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Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ture of the mobile device can give up a persons location and make it possible for crimi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68362460849 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.779362148 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197625715746 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082711773826 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061391268088 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128992523893 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433103934357 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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