ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THE ONE DIGITAL DEVICE
In the era of booming technology, especially in the context of the Covid-19 epidemic, the use of these devices in learning and education has become a matter of course. However, the use of digital devices in learning can bring both benefits and disadvantages. In terms of benefits, we can learn anywhere with just a smartphone, we not only have access to a wider range of knowledge but also learn it a more interesting way. All the information and textbooks needed for going to school can be easily stored on the phone. And when studying is stressful, we can relax by listening to music on this phone. Besides the benefits that it brings, there are still disadvantages to it. This device can distract students from studying instead we will be engrossed in gaming or texting all day. And worst of all, this digital device has a huge impact on our health. It can cause our vision to be reduced if we use the device for too long or as the source of waves emitted from it can adversely affect our brain. In conclusion, although the benefits of digital devices are undeniable, we should also consider the appropriate use of these devices so that we can protect our health and learn the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62085308057 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64814004874 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1489975577 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160557272801 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077416068433 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668694778415 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160557272801 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.