Advantages and disadvantages of receiving education online

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...ucation online are we sit in the comfort,at home we can do lessons free,for lazy ch...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...e comfort,at home we can do lessons free,for lazy children it is very well,because t...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...s free,for lazy children it is very well,because they do their lessons when they want.Fo...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...se they do their lessons when they want.For the children ,who want to study by hear...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... lessons when they want.For the children ,who want to study by heart they will stu...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...udy in any situations, in any condition.For them it is not problem to study online ...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
...receiving education online as in school.How they study at school they are continue ...
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Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...chool.How they study at school they are continue to study online. There are any disadva...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...are any disadvantages of studying online,one of them,it is bad for our eyes,because ...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...dvantages of studying online,one of them,it is bad for our eyes,because we sit and ...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...nline,one of them,it is bad for our eyes,because we sit and look to the TV,telephone and...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
... is bad for our eyes,because we sit and look to the TV,telephone and to the laptop.S...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , telephone
...r eyes,because we sit and look to the TV,telephone and to the laptop.Some children do not ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...k to the TV,telephone and to the laptop.Some children do not watch lessons,do not do...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , do
...aptop.Some children do not watch lessons,do not do the homeworks.For lazy students ...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: For
...t watch lessons,do not do the homeworks.For lazy students it is good not to do the ...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...k and say to the parents that he or she do homework, but he or she play games or s...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...at he or she do homework, but he or she play games or sit in the other channels or t...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
... other channels or talking with someone.Some students think that if they do not do t...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
...think that if they do not do the lessons,their parents and teachers do not know about ...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...arents and teachers do not know about it,but all teachers know who do the homework.w...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Teachers
...ers know who do the homework.who do not.Teachers check all homework and put marks. In m...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ol it is better than to studying online.There are more disadvantages of receiving edu...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eiving education online than advantages.But if people want to receive education he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88839285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12300637938 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.848133087 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.75 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279606004734 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.320385897821 0.084324248473 380% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241465527465 0.0667982634062 361% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320385897821 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241465527465 0.056905535591 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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