The advantages of English spreading as a global language will continue outweigh the disadvantages To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The advantages of English spreading as a global language will continue outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is will the advantages of english language continue to outweigh the disadvantages or not. Now people are beginning to realize that, english is the global language, and knowing it has a lot of benefits in our world. Personally, I tend to think that now the advantages of english are outweighing its drawbacks.

Firstly, it is well known that english is an internationally recognized language and almost half the population of the world speaks in it. What I mean here is that, most science breakthroughs, academic resources, and top news magazines are often published in english, meaning that people can explore knowledge quickly and directly from the original source. One of the main reasons behind that is only knowing english can open access to tons of resources, as well as, most study programmes at the top universities are taught in english. A good case point is that the top 10 universities of the world are mostly taught in english, demonstrating that it is a worldwide language.

On the other hand, it can also be argued that, causes of globalization can be harmful to some cultures of humanity. That is to say, by learning english from an early age people can miss their own cultures and languages. Take for example, India in our case, westernization affected some families, they tend to live like in Europe or USA, while losing its own identity and culture.

In conclusion, taking everything into account in our final analysis we can say that, despite the fact of westernization, the advantages of knowing english will continue to outweigh its drawbacks.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, well, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01858736059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95486423037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8633841489 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215362655441 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921284835456 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902654952952 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147234751563 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100575780678 0.056905535591 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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