Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, with advanced society, advertisements have a tendency to be more and more ubiquitous. From my point of view, this phenomenon could be both negative and positive developments.
On the one hand, Some positive sides could be attributable to this trend. Firstly, it helps customers to get accessibility to new products in easily way. For instance, when people want to figure out or buy a product. Instead of going to the shop, they just need at home and see advertisements on TV or social media about that product.It quite convenient for them to make a purchase without spending much time. Furthermore, as for companies, Advertisement is one of the best way for them to promote their newly release product to customers. For example, when Company A want to introduce cosmetic product to consumers, they have to create a viral videos or write blogs via advertisements on TV or newspapers .It is considered as a way of helping them to approach potential customers.
On the other hand, the emergency in quantities of commercial ads exerts some negative impacts on people today. First of all, it make people spoil their choice with wide ranges of different products were advertised.Somehow this enables them not to be well-formed about a certain product.Therefore they would not know how to choose a suitable or good product when having too much information loaded .Besides, it also spoils the flow of people when they keep track of information on phone which were interrupted by a kind of useless advertising. Case in point, like me, advertisements about games really drive me nuts when I am enjoying a wonderful film on Youtube.
In conclusion, From my perspective, it has equally both negative and positive effects on customers when advertisements are seem to become more and more prevalent than ever.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...ts on customers when advertisements are seem to become more and more prevalent than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02640264026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14025665571 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7360398009 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172297101058 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742566949199 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101631219252 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163156574295 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131763525402 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...n TV or social media about that product.It quite convenient for them to make a pur...
^^
Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'video'?
Suggestion: video
... consumers, they have to create a viral videos or write blogs via advertisements on TV...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s via advertisements on TV or newspapers .It is considered as a way of helping the...
^^
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...via advertisements on TV or newspapers .It is considered as a way of helping them ...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...pacts on people today. First of all, it make people spoil their choice with wide ran...
^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Somehow
...s of different products were advertised.Somehow this enables them not to be well-formed...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... be well-formed about a certain product.Therefore they would not know how to choose a sui...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... be well-formed about a certain product.Therefore they would not know how to choose a sui...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... when having too much information loaded .Besides, it also spoils the flow of peop...
^^
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...hen having too much information loaded .Besides, it also spoils the flow of people when...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...ts on customers when advertisements are seem to become more and more prevalent than ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02640264026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14025665571 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7360398009 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172297101058 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742566949199 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101631219252 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163156574295 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131763525402 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.