Today TV channels provide man s sport shows more than women s sport shows why Should TV channels give equal time for women s sport and men s sport

Essay topics:

Today, TV channels provide man’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows, why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

In this day and age, TV channels have a tendency to prioritizing male’s sport programmes over those of women .There are hosts of different arrays of reasons to account for this trend. According to me, It is quite essential for TV channels to have unbiased coverage for both sexes.

One of deep-rooted reason for this matter is that when they engage in activities, it does not seem to meet enough entertainment and competition in most cases to TV viewers. Contrarily, male participants are admittedly appealing and competitive to viewers more. Since with the superior physical strength, sportsmen are able to perform legendary skills but sportswomen can not when they compete.As a matter of fact that it is common to see a male football player greatly dribble and bounce the ball with highly speed multiple times during a match. Whereas, female football player often do not do due to the lack of stamina.Another reason contributing to this trend is that it stems from financial interests.For instance, sportsmen shows are generally more well-received than women channels because of its revenue so it bring back a huge amount of views and generate big income for broadcaster.

With being said, TV station should give equal airtime for sport shows of both women and men. because if this continues in the long run, Vietnamese sports industry would be degraded gradually in upcoming future such as economy, culture .For example, People ignore sportswomen shows lead to views and income was considerably decreased. Furthermore, unequal development can not help the culture of a nation to life up to the new height or have as prevelant as the other countries of the world.

In conclusion, I think female’s sports shows should be given time broadcasting as male’s sports shows in coming time as soon as possible.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10738255034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8956445644 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0217044446 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.2 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376185200711 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145956836395 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137185618635 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239274924081 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770848759756 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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