The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

The line graph compares the quantity of people moving from rural area to city of all
three different countries between 2000 and 2020 and the projection for 2025.
As can be seen from the chart that the number of residents changing their
accomodation from rural area to urban area has a tendency to increase over the
shown period .Later it will remain a stable upward to 2025 in Country A and Country
C except for Country B .
In 2000, Country A had about 18 millions inhabitants with the highest position in
three countries. This was followed by Country B and Country C , approximately 10
millions and 8 millions accordingly. Over the period of 20 years, this figure still
witnessed a significant growth in urbanist population of Country A and Country B
,climbing up to 80 millions people , is roughly three times higher than that of Country
C with the number nearly 30 millions.

By 2025, Country A and Country B are two nations being predicted to continue
growing , around 85 millions and 90 millions respectively whilst there will have a
slightly drop in Country C , with decrease of 28 millions.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...0 and 2020 and the projection for 2025. As can be seen from the chart that the num...
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...dency to increase over the shown period .Later it will remain a stable upward to ...
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...ncy to increase over the shown period .Later it will remain a stable upward to 2025 ...
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...ry A and Country C except for Country B . In 2000, Country A had about 18 millio...
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... was followed by Country B and Country C , approximately 10 millions and 8 millio...
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...t population of Country A and Country B ,climbing up to 80 millions people , is r...
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...ry B ,climbing up to 80 millions people , is roughly three times higher than that...
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...ons being predicted to continue growing , around 85 millions and 90 millions resp...
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...ons respectively whilst there will have a slightly drop in Country C , with decrease of 28 mill...
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... will have a slightly drop in Country C , with decrease of 28 millions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, still, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90526315789 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75278115299 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6724135491 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.333333333 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305752906688 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156228338264 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870479881076 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105272580629 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742920591994 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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