The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advent of society, using social media platforms are seem to be more ubiquitous in this day and age.This trend would create pros and cons , but I think the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, it is clear that social networking sites would bring some advantages. One evident strength is that it has helped people easily keep in contact with their beloved ones, in regardless of geographical barriers. For instance, when they go abroad or reside in foreign countries, they can stay in touch with their family and friends on a regular basis via using the video call features of Facebook or zalo. In the other words, These days thanks to social networks, companies all over the worlds can approach to clients in an easy way by marketing their names and promote newly released products to the customers on Facebook or Instagram. This method help them save a great deal of time and expenses in comparision with the tradition ones such as magazines or newspaper.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages that would create. People in modern society have preference for contacting with one another by Facebook or zalo over meeting up in person .This lead to lack of social quality interaction between people and weaken family bonds.For instance, when children just do pay attention to technological equipments to text messages with their friends, they get distracted the words that parents said. This cause the quarrels between parents and children. Moreover, it also deteriorate their health seriously when they keep their eyes glued to the terminal of technology applications and indulge themself in virtual world such as imparing the visions, leading to emotional distress…
In conclusion, I have to admit that social media platforms are far more significant to people’s life. But I strongly believe that negative effects are outnumbered compared to positive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15434083601 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68701976123 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.974753411 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.727272727 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134769406251 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443372209607 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474854555697 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940965620806 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423951704122 0.056905535591 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.