Some people think that news has no connection with people s lives so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
... bear no relation to the life of people.Therefore, reading newspapers or watch TV news is...
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Suggestion: For
...or watch TV news is absolutely wasteful.For me, I all the way disagree with this ...
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...For me, I all the way disagree with this viewpoint.There are some reasons to acco...
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Suggestion: There
... the way disagree with this viewpoint.There are some reasons to account for this. ...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...s and with what is happening around them.. Furthermore, reading daily news or watc...
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Suggestion: For
... knowledge and broadening their horizon.For instance, thanks to watching TV news, p...
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Suggestion: period
...g my major. In addition to that, the period of time people spend reading news or watching t...
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... I forget all negative feelings and only focus on it. This is advantaged opportun...
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Suggestion: Depending
... news play a pivotal role in their life.Depending on their hobbies and occupation,people ...
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Suggestion: , people
...epending on their hobbies and occupation,people might gain pieces of information when t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95768814175 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0093789382 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39782950921 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176245582053 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910303486897 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216276227701 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103563913264 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.