Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors What are the reasons for this problem How can it be solved

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Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

In this day and age, doctors or nurses have a tendency to work in urban areas rather than rural areas due to different reasons.This leads to the lack of doctors in the countryside .Yet It also has some possible solutions to tackle this matter.

On the one hand, medical doctors tend to choose cities over countryside to practice.Since some are breadwinner of their families so they are in need of earning lucrative living to bring home the bacon so as to live up to the fullest their family life's demands .To complete those responsibilities, they have to choose appropriate places which provide them with incentives such as salary,holidays and others, specifically money so that they could have best conditions to raise their family and meet standards of living . Furthermore, urban areas get better working environment conditions and full of medical facilities more than rural areas.This help them to have a confidence in curing diseases for patient.Cities may be one of the best choices for them.Those are some reasons to be attributable to this trend .
To address this problem then firstly, governments should have some applicable policies to support doctors in countrysides such as providing public subsidises for them yearly. Moreover, The authorities should be considering in salary increase for those who made many major contribution to medical sector in rural areas.Besides, To doctors relocate to countrysides, governments should also offer full of amenities about medical area to create opportunities for them to have strong motivation and confidences in order to devote themself to medicine
In conclusion, Although this matter is really a tough nut to crack, i strongly believe that it is no insurmountable and also will be solved in the short run in upcoming future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, as to, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1276763231 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.209258976 49.4020404114 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.6 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.2 20.7667163134 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28265202342 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151948325482 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459194469811 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161835591919 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438576272093 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.