Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors What are the reasons for this problem How can it be solved

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Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

Medical professionals have a significant role in the betterment of the human health, and society as well. In modern time, doctors have a tendency to serve for the people in towns to earn much money, while people in villages remain deprived of better medical suggestions as well as treatment. This essay will discuss the possible causes that are associated with this trend, and also provide solutions to these problems.
To begin with, most of the doctors nowadays open their chamber in big cities instead of going to rural areas to aid the needy people who seek for better health counseling. In metropolitans, there are huge options for leading a better life, like, big shopping malls, advanced medical centres and so on. Thereby, in cities, doctors have enough opportunities to lead a prosperous life in comparison to remote areas. Moreover, there are many more options to give upgraded education to their children. For example, one of my friends recently made his children admitted in an English medium school at a metropolitan cities, where he has shifted few years earlier.
Doctors should not rush after only for their own betterment, rather they should be more responsible to the welfare of human being both in urban and rural areas. Government should provide better scopes for doctors as well as their offspring, like, they should take steps to ensure better education for children. Furthermore, the government can make schemes to provide better medical facilities to doctors. For instance, the health ministry in the last year adopted a policy through which if a doctor get ill seriously he or she would be able to go through the surveillance of foreign experts. Additionally, the government will bear the cost.
To conclude, it can be said that though migration of doctors to cities can bring some sort of deprivation to rural people, their serving mentality as well as initiatives taken by the government can be helpful to mitigate this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
...English medium school at a metropolitan cities, where he has shifted few years earlier...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ast year adopted a policy through which if a doctor get ill seriously he or she wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07120743034 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71465658763 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1710413586 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30132051264 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914403534967 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525916815561 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175671012155 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347177386346 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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