Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors What are the reasons for this problem How can it be solved

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Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

A healthcare - associated job can become a high-paying occupation in the city. A multitude of doctors, as a result, opts to work in central places which results in a lack of medical manpower in suburban areas. This essay will explain the underlying causes and a resolution to mitigate this phenomenon.

There are two key rationales for the growing number of doctors working in cities. First of all, healthcare is often of subservient importance in numerous rural places. In such areas, people often place greater emphasis on earning a living to cater for their basic needs. By contrast, civilians in developed cities not only regard health as a priority but are also capable of afford such costly services. As a result, doctors in megacities can enjoy a higher income from the massive spending of a citizens. Second, the level of healthcare system in cities can facilitate the work experience and career of many medical workers. For example, while advanced technology and equipment can reduce a great deal of difficulty in surgical procedures, many doctors can learn extensively as experts gather at hospitals with top-tier status.

Despite the aforementioned causes, the government should allocate budgets to improve the fabric of rural healthcare system. First of all, there should be investment in the infrastructure and medical facilities to enable the smooth operation of the hospitals. Improving the competence of medical workforce through training courses can also give healthcare system a boost. Finally, authorities ought to raise the awareness of rural people as to increase healthcare demand and attract investment from foreign investors.

In conclusion, the shortage of doctors in rural places is due to the low demand for healthcare services and underdeveloped facilities. Investment to improve the healthcare system is suggested to alleviate the situation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43493150685 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00096859885 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9156488489 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215429901185 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657628438271 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461278930832 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118261833468 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542670286009 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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