Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons and relevant examples to illustrate your points.
It is generally believed that sporting events held at a global scale like World Cup can provide a driving force to relieve the stress on cross-border relationship and promote proper patriotism. I completely agree with this opinion as the core of these occasions are to strengthen world peace and facilitate global solidarity.
On the one hand, it is the message of peace and unity conveyed by global sporting occasions that contributes to the alleviation of international conflicts. This philanthropic aim is exemplified by the fact that these competitions are opened to every civilian from every corner of the globe regardless of their nationality, race, gender and religion. As athletes gather at the host country to contest, they would disregard the existing conflicts between nations and devote themselves to the spirit of the game as well as give their best performance instead. Furthermore, the importance of coordination and solidarity are further accentuated as a part of the highly influential sports spirit radiated by these events. All of the above goes to prove that international sporting events are organized to emphasize how humans can ease cross-cultural tensions and unite to gravitate towards a common goal in peace.
On the other hand, it is true that transnational sporting events enable people to express their support for their nation in an adequate manner. Their patriotism, more precisely, is depicted through professionalism and great endeavor without undermining their contestants’ country even when they fail. As they compete to win the highest rank for their country, participants around the world must conform to a predetermined set of rules which is to compete fairly with mutual respect to other contestants. For example, the patriotism of Olympic athletes is displayed by the relentless effort put in the match like how intense they have trained in order to earn prizes for their country. However, throughout the game, there is little or no conflict. These athletes even display compliments on the performance of their rivals or show admiration for their skills.
As mentioned above, the fundamental aim of international sporting events plays a pivotal role in not only reducing cross-country tensions but also providing a vehicle for contestants to express their positive patriotism.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: All the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42424242424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10315630223 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584022038567 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4982173209 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.642857143 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175151707931 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597152942177 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527107829792 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116671331531 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459565689943 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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