The table below gives information about UK independent films Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about UK independent films.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table demonstrates the number of releases of different movie genres in the UK in 2012 as well as their percentages of all releases and revenue from ticket sales. In general, drama and documentary were produced the most with comedy having the highest income.

Regarding the number of movies released in 2012, drama and documentary shared the same figure of 35 movies, followed by comedy which was lower, with 26 movies. The first two genres accounted for 23.6% of all releases, however, drama's income from sales was much higher than documentary's revenue, at 8.3% and 2.9% respectively. Comedy witnessed its movies making up 17.6% of all releases and nearly 50% of income.

Horror had 14 movies released in 2012, this figure for thriller was slightly lower, at 13. Their percentages of all releases shared the same pattern, at 9.5% and 8.8% respectively. At 20.2%, horror was the second-highest in income from ticket sales. The number of releases in other genres was insignificant, mostly below 10 movies in 2012.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, well, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70997464657 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1626388782 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0269583317311 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013600917575 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019898376546 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233610118268 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134524876727 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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