Youngsters now admire and imitate media and sports personalities even though they do not always set a good example. Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
Your essay should be about 300 to 350 words.
In recent times, the youth is having an exceeding adulation and even go so far as to pattern themselves on the popular people of the media and sports, who sometimes bring negative influences. Even though this phenomenon could generate a number of unfavourable impacts, I deem that most youngsters can benefit from a moderate fondness for such individuals.
On one side of the argument, youngsters are prone to endure great disappointment born from the fact that their idols are not commensurate with their expectations. Undue admiration often induces youngsters to have a relatively idealistic picture of their models. More precisely, in the eyes of these avid fans, their admired ones are always flawless as well as well-rounded individuals who would never commit a mistake. A direct result of this is that when scandals related to these stars are exposed, the enthusiastic fans become inevitably disheartened by the grave disappointment. In some cases, overzealous admirers may even go to extreme lengths to relieve their emotions, for instance, taking a revenge on the idols or starting to develop a cynical mentality of people.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned drawbacks, admiration at a moderate level can be meritable to the youth mentally and physically. The most far-reaching influence of public figures, be it in the media and sports, is that they can be a source of motivation. Their inspiring stories like how sports stars’ consistent training and strong will-power so as to accomplish their goals can provide an incentive for their followers to put in an effort and persevere to achieve their goals. A collateral benefit from this is that youngsters might undergo changes in terms of lifestyle and routine. For example, influencers who are famous for their fashion and healthy lifestyle can alter many teenager's choices of clothes or encourage them to adopt a new routine. Another case in point is that the young generation will start to exercise to copy their sports role model’ routine to keep fit.
In conclusion, while excessive adoration for media and sports figures can do more harm than good, I believe that in most cases, youngsters who possess a moderate admiration can be advantageously influenced in many ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 349, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nsistent training and strong will-power so as to accomplish their goals can provide an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26111111111 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04097023991 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2824300688 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150896533674 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534666666136 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384192211978 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102181982233 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305136573822 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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