Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?
One of the most controversial issues these days relates to the inadequate of medical doctors in the remote areas. Many people believe that doctors should work in cities because they could earn a larger amount of wage, while the others claim that doctors ought to spend time on working in rural areas where people have less chances to have access to high and modern medical treatments.
It is true to say that working and living in modern cities drives plenty of benefits for medical doctors. Doctors could have the opportunities to deepen their speciality due to the well-furnished equipment in modern hospitals. Furthermore, they could receive subsidies and support for the medical projects. This means they are able to improve and boost their career. Moreover, many hospital managers pay a rich amount of money for medical workers, who gained the higher education qualifications in order to retaining the well-qualified and skillful workforce. As a result, medical employee prefer working in urban areas to rural regions.
On the other hand, people in the rural regions still have to face the lack of medical staff and health care. From the above-mentioned reasons, the government should impose some solutions so as to deal with this problem. The authorities should encourage the fresh graduates work in the rural regions as a volunteer work. Besides, local authorities are able to hearten the doctors by increasing salary or creating conveniences in living and working in that place.
In conclusion, while scores of people agree that medical employee should spend time on work in cities, others believe that it is better for them to support and work in remote areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO
Message: Use simply 'to'
...government should impose some solutions so as to deal with this problem. The authorities...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13553113553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69711514171 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0358678097 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299366226623 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101108683542 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461518462914 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176468628246 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683556971652 0.056905535591 120% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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