The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the greatest issues these days that the globe is facing environmental pollution. Among several solutions, increasing the fuel price is considered the most effective way to largely solve this severe general dilemma. From my perspective, I agree wholeheartedly that this wise resolution may support barring the pollution enlargement.
There are scores of reasons that inevitably lead to environmentally severe and irreparable damage, especially air pollution. Air pollution is triggered by exhausted fumes emitted by vehicles and factories. Moreover, evidence of increasing air pollution is seen in lung cancer, asthma, allergies, and various breathing diseases. To tackle these issues, authorities should pose strictly laws and resolutions to halt air pollution, among which imposing heavy taxes on fuel namely petrol, oil, and natural gases is the best method. When the fuel price was raised, people would intend to move by public transportation systems. Likewise, they would reduce driving and consume less gas to economize property, consequently, that encourages lessening the use of non-renewable energy depletion.
On the slip side, critics may say that the increasing fuel price would cause spiraling inflation. As a consequence, that could create a heavy burden on residents and the government. It, however, is debated that renewable power, which is plentiful and maintained, will dominate the energy market, and result in a wide range of opportunities to stimulate developing these kinds of energy. This may not only improve environmental issues but is more economical and more protected.
In conclusion, it is high time for authorities to put these afore-mentioned into practice to diminish the global problem. Furthermore, it should be considered thoroughly and prudentially.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7052238806 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18740376658 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5654478042 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166045834737 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455069631911 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497959400958 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901027807914 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496274882005 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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