Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
These days, there has been an accelerating trend in overseas studies. This trend has benefits namely educational instruction as well as its drawbacks towards culture shock. The following paragraphs would intend to dig into both viewpoints
On the one hand, foreign students may suffer from several obstacles. First of all, living in a brand-new country that has a completely different culture and tradition, social atmosphere and lifestyle could provoke students into a sense of frustration, stress, and homesickness, leading to negative effects on academic performances. Secondly, the student might struggle with high living expenses in a foreign country. Besides, the exorbitant expenses of institutions' fee, accommodation prices, local transportation, and daily demand impose a heavy burden on students. In order to cover the bill, many people might opt to devote a rich amount of time to do a part-time job, as a consequence, this would significantly affect their performance at universities.
On the other hand, there are compelling reasons why studying abroad is beneficial. The major advantage towards studying abroad is high-qualified education. Due to the technical teaching methods and highly skilled, experience lectures and professors, undergraduates could acquire in-depth and specialize knowledge in their fields, thus they could cater demands of global cooperation and gain better job opportunities. Overseas learners, for instance, have to manage to deal with housework such as cooking, cleaning, and how to efficiently allocate their time between studying and a part-time job, which in turn tend to support students to be more self-reliant and mature as an adult.
In conclusion, the aforementioned pros and cons display that there are many strengths and weaknesses regarding studying abroad. However, the drawbacks are more likely to pale in comparison to the benefits, thus if students are able to overcome those difficulties, the experience will be extremely rewarding.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66555183946 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18882948125 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6382567283 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253506401839 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841680744763 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828383183104 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135113121495 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07701911038 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.