Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
What is your view on this?
Give reasons for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
In contemporary era studying abroad become a trend.students have grown keen interest for achieving higher degree from foreign country.it has advantage and disadvantage both perspective. this essay intends to describe both view.I presonally think that prose outweigh cons.
study abroad makes people ability in different aspect.First and foremost student can explore to new things such as culture,tradition,language etc.By introducing this creative things they intend to more creative,extrovert.also they would gain knowledge how to survive unfamiliar condition that skill make them more perfect.Resarch shows that people who study from foreign country they can do better in their work place compare whom are not acquire this skill.
In contrast ,some people belive that it has also some drawback and they gives the reason follows it takes longer time to cope up with new environment.In addition many learners can not compete with new lifestyle so they suffer more.Sometimes,Their academic career stake in danger as they are not familiar with their language which is crucial for effective learning. some physiologist depicts that around 25% student every year can not complete their higher study and back their own country because of inferiority complex.they have to struggle for become comfortable with their customs.
To my way of thinking every event has two aspect . By learning from modern culture or tradition it makes students more strengthen towards new challenging world.every journey increase their choice to learn new skill.
To sum up, learning native region can also play important role in contrast if advanced level education achieve then it will open new door to become specialised and use this power for welfare own country and system of education can also be changed by intoducing new ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, in addition, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56474820144 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24032971203 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661870503597 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.34955931 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.375 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150630060867 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635084617393 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386429571539 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775569116764 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411105205962 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.