Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your opinion

In this day and age, Due to with the prevalence of advertising, It is said that advertising increasingly succeed in attracting and persuading buyers . Whereas other people believe that Because advertising is too ubiquitous so they are seem not to concern it any longer. From my perspective, I think that one of the most success of advertising is to encourage people to buy things.

On the one hand, The main reason to explain for reason why people occur not to take notice of advertising as they used to because it causes boredom to people. There are some kinds of advertisement which are same each other but it appears to hit the headline on social media and TV. Besides, sometimes it also gets on people nerves as it spoil the flow when they are working or watching. Therefore, they think that it is not too important or special so that they care about it.

On the other hand, Advertising nowadays is created by wide ranges of eye-catching models coming from different brands. So it enables people to buy a lot.For example, like TV 3D with its visual effects and convenient design. It drew attention from a thousands of consumers to make a purchase though it is quite cost an arm and a leg .Furthermore, Thanks to modern approach to buyer, advertising gets accessibility in a easily way and exerts curiosity to consumers. For instance, such as Products are advertised on Shopee, with viral Baby Shark song and celebrity endorsement , it captured the purchaser in a long time.

In conclusion, Although it is partly true that nowadays advertising is so quite popular and people tend to ignore it more, I still support the view that it is not too exaggerating that advertising is of the utmost successfulness.

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Average: 8.7 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81694915254 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91319544582 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292777624424 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104941916043 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589090808876 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18383902885 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582886036102 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Companies promote advertisements via social media with the hope to persuade the customers to buy certain products. While many people believe that the ubiquity of promotion makes it less attractive to them, I would argue that commercials have been significantly effective in increasing the number of consumers.
On the one hand, the problem of advertising is that it not only appear with a high level of frequency but also unpredictably. For example, Youtube, a popular video sharing network, integrates at least one advertisement in every video and that advertisement often interrupts in the middle of a film or even a song. That would make viewers lose track of what they are watching, and also lose their interest in those shows. As a result, the viewers tend to overlook the content of the advertisements and skip them as soon as possible.
On the other hand, I would argue that advertisement plays an important role in drawing customer’s attention. To begin with, advertising is designed to target a wide range of viewers, which means the content of advertisements vary according to the types of customer. For instance, commercials aimed at kids have colourful images and catchy songs, making them interested in that particular product. In this regard, they can dominate the market and boost the sales of a company. Moreover, advertisements are repeated over and over on TV or the internet, consequently, they become fixed in the memory of viewers. In this way, customers choose to purchase the familiar products rather than what they have never seen before.
In conclusion, while some people tend to ignore commercials because of their omnipresence, I believe that the contribution of advertising is critical to the success of compaies.