Advertising is sometimes much more convenient for people to buy products. Same people, however, believe that advertising has no role to seek public attention. In my opinion, it is wheather intensely successful or as common that people no longer pay attention depends on many factors.
In one hand, a large number of people often claim that advertising has a great impact at persuading them to buy things such as clothes and foods. It is because of their online shopping, most of the people are now depend on online shop as they get the update news from home. Advertising plays significant role in online shopping. For example, some company put the information about their products in various types of social media like Facebook and Instagram. As a result, a person can be easily influenced to buy that specific product through online shopping. In short, online shop bassed products are largely depend on advertisement, and so people buy them in a large quantity.
On the other hand, others argue that advertisement has no role to play for people to buy products. As it is so common that a person does not pay attention to an advertise. It is more obvious for them who go to the shop directly instead of ordering online. Hence, they can find their needs from the shop. In addition, they also enjoy to pursue the information by themselves rather than depending on adventisement. Moreover, it is very common in old people who love to pay their attention on shopping rather than advertising.
To conclude, although some people illustrate that advertisement is so common for not paying attention, in my opinion, however, I strongly believe that it has a great impact at persuading people as well as force them to buy products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...epends on many factors. In one hand, a large number of people often claim that advertising has...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ne shopping, most of the people are now depend on online shop as they get the update n...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...online shop bassed products are largely depend on advertisement, and so people buy the...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ole to play for people to buy products. As it is so common that a person does not ...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that a person does not pay attention to an advertise. It is more obvious for them who go to ...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to them'.
Suggestion: obvious to them
...y attention to an advertise. It is more obvious for them who go to the shop directly instead of ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy pursuing'.
Suggestion: enjoy pursuing
...s from the shop. In addition, they also enjoy to pursue the information by themselves rather th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90784982935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80163827847 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0935992017 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347659311603 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116820232647 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099770182075 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246780250486 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707771451123 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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