Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Shortage of money or the jobs people do not like is a very common situation in recent times. Some people often claim that trying to improve the worst situation is always better than leading poor life. In my opinion wheather it is good or let the situation be same, depends on many factors.
A large number of people consider that bad situation should be accepted because of the factors such as unemployment and providing family supports. Unemployment is one of the most leading reason for unsatisfactory Jobs in many region. For example, In Bangladesh, many people are now Jobless for lack of vacancies. As a result they had no option to choose the Job sectors. Hence, they start working in a place may be they do not like at all. Secondly, people from the lower class family, have no option to start their own business for lack of money. Consequently, they need to accept bad situation without judging. Mareover, people from devoloping countries often need to help their families. It is an extra pressure for them, which bassically bound them to stay on their job sector.
On the otherhand, it is often claimed that improving the worst situation is always better than staying unsatisfactory job sectors. First of all, further study can help people to improve. For instance, a student when finish his higher secondary study and immidietly Join a job, he will definitely do not get a good job. As a result, he will fall into a depressed situation. In that case, if he try to finish his bachelor or master programme from a engineering or doctor field, he can easily find a better solution. Secondly, business can be a good example for improving bad situations. People can take bank loan or borrow money from friends and family respectively start a business. It is much more diffenent than working in an unsatisfactory Job sector. Last but not least, people can always try to switch their job, which will help them to be satisfied with their situation.
In my opinion, I strongly believe that people must try to change their situation from bad to good. Although sometimes it is extremely difficult because of unemployment fearness, there is always a way where there is a will.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...on be same, depends on many factors. A large number of people consider that bad situation shou...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun region seems to be countable; consider using: 'many regions'.
Suggestion: many regions
...ading reason for unsatisfactory Jobs in many region. For example, In Bangladesh, many peopl...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are now Jobless for lack of vacancies. As a result they had no option to choose t...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...s. Hence, they start working in a place may be they do not like at all. Secondly, peop...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...epressed situation. In that case, if he try to finish his bachelor or master progra...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h his bachelor or master programme from a engineering or doctor field, he can eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82133333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70029990104 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4428087205 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6086956522 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3043478261 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280117631522 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815187912416 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682049073265 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186778876735 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521885804121 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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