Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an indispensible part of one's life. The age plays an important role in the case of marriage. Consequently, I strongly believe that at least 21 years should be the minimum age of marring for both boys and girls. Thus, they will understand the value of bonding well as the responsibility.
First of all, when someone reaches at the age of 21, he certainly feels the depth of bonding. Bonding is something which is considered as a basement of any relationships, and so leading a healthy marriage life, one should achieves the ability of understanding that. For example, some researchers from Dhaka University state that people who marry before 21, they often ended with a divorse. Following their researh, it is clear that the inadequate knowldge of the value of bonding makes misunderstanding. As a result, they go into deep deppression and break their marriage. By judging this fact, numerous people often claim that 21 is the perfect age when people ought to marry.
Responsibility is another crucial issue related to marriage. Simply, after 18, people start to take responsibilities. In addition, at the age of 21, a penson is adult enough taking responsibilities of others. For instance, a girl feels much more convenient to give birth a child at the age of 21, because she is mature enough to take care of her child. By contrast, a boy turns into a man at the age of 21, and he not only ables to take care his wife but also his child. In the terms of responsibility, some people consider that 21 is the legal age for both male and female, making a family,
To conclude, people can marry in different ages.
I, however, personally prefer that 21 is the ideal age for marring, as this age provides both good understanding and maturity as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Marriage is an indispensible part of ones life. The age plays an important role i...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...ing a healthy marriage life, one should achieves the ability of understanding that. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77450980392 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9607933313 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9717614983 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338680376818 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934276102235 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819477768756 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177663432897 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578524934323 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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