Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that people suppose that accepting an abhorrent situation is the best way, such as unsatisfying work or the lack of finance. However, I firmly believe that in this case, individuals should make an effort to revolutionize this context in order to open opportunities for innovations.
On the one hand, only if people do not have enough ability to handle these situations, engaging with them is the best solution. While individuals embrace these situations with unexpectedness, they can relieve pressure and anxiety, which they are encountering. For example, people tend to be under strain when they are working with an undesirable affair. In addition, almost everyone is significantly nervous when stating the financial problem. It partly affects the mental well-being of humans. Take an employee working as an officer, for example, they do not have the strength of finance, only getting a pay of 5 million per month as the basic level of salary, furthermore, this job makes them uncomfortable and thrilled, therefore yielding burdens both emotionally and physically.
On the other hand, seeking a new change from their effort is a better way to transform those bad situations. Only a small change also contributes to breaking the mold to go forward. In case, people work with unsatisfying jobs, they should try to explore other jobs to be able to make them delightful and passionate about it. Likewise, if individuals have the limit of money they should find a solution to expand their budget and implement it afterward. For example, a person has a desire to work with ideal work, firstly, they have to prepare the necessary skills for the next jump to step nearly to their expectation. Similarly, people should invest more time for work and get more jobs to enhance their pocket, parallelly, just saving money to keep balance in the rat race, airming to avoid risk in impossible situations.
In short, more opinions believe that accepting a terrible situation is the best way, nevertheless, it is more beneficial to make an action to rotate a bad context by exposing new positive alterations to address those problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07932011331 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90397151884 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56940509915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4270421049 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.533333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193165819865 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618434523143 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610479038335 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1307348811 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388701946077 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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