In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation

Essay topics:

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.Why might this be the case.Do you think it is a positive or negative situation.

In this day and age, people tend to think that it is quite essential for them to have their own home in lieu of hiring one .There are some reasons to account for this. From my point of view, this trend is positive due to the benefits which have been to human life

On the one hand, people think that it is necessary for them to buy a house because they believe that when they have a permanent home , they can pay an attention to work to settle down their life. Furthermore, Nowadays rental fees are pretty cost an arm and a leg, people usually spend a lot of money to pay monthly.Instead of that people focus on earning money and buy a house which is suitable for their budget. Although It may be small , they feel comfortable and do not need to worry about rent. Another reasons is that because when owning a home help people have lots of motivation to achieve other goals in their life. For example, If someone want to tie the knot, they will surely have a confidence in getting married as they have their own home.

This trend bring some positive things to people. Because when people want to become the owner of a house they will know the way to set aside money to make a purchase. From then on, they would not probably squander money on useless things .For instance, when people have intention to buy home, their shopping or eating habit will change to allocate money for buying house.They will be less go shopping or buy some kind of must have items which is wasteful.

In conclusion, Although there are some negative elements, I strongly believe that positive sides do outweigh negative ones. It is a good idea for people to possess a house compared to renting.

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Average: 5.7 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48366013072 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2709733492 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2221481679 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220105697647 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100536642941 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556536718563 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159595469395 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375812711614 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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