Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
using advertising in daily life is a matter of controversy. Some people cling to that advertising could promulgate product images and enlarge our knowledge whereas others reckon that it leads to wasting a huge amount of money. my essay is going to elucidate both beneficial and unbeneficial outcomes of this statement.
On the one hand, applying advertising in the economy exerts positive effects on development. this is the most popular and valuable marketing measure to disseminate the company's product image. Not only does glorify brand but it can increase sales of products and earn high profit. Especially, using it's in tourism popularizes national image and attracts tourists. On the other hand, it put the company's capital in peril by spending a large amount of money on advertising. According to economic statistics, about 40% of companies go bankrupt because advertising products do not match consumer tastes.
In terms of education, watching advertising might develop people’s creativity, update quickly information, and widen knowledge. Let’s take my elder brother as a telling example. Thanks to seeing a lot of children's commercials from a young age, he was able to speak at an early age and was very interested in drawing. However, in another aspect, nowadays a lot of advertising, which has violent and sexual images, exerts deleterious effects on brain children’s development. In addition, regarding emotions, ads inserted between movies also make viewers uncomfortable.
In the final analysis, each idea has its own value. developing advertising can widen our vision and knowledge while its costs a lot of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42578125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01833336524 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68359375 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4896789138 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963706681356 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311193478264 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458501186116 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581365033353 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162491079458 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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