Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
In our contemporary society, advertisings are gaining more momentum. Personally, I believe this is a negative development.
To begin with, since commercials are becoming more prevalent, people are getting accustomed to the consistency and the obsolete methodology used in advertisements, which leads to people's dissatisfaction and disappointment. To be more specific, many companies have been using unchanged pictures and tapes considered to be old-fashioned to introduce their commodities, failing to meet customer's demand for advancements and other intriguing approaches. Moreover, as advertising becoming more ubiquitous, a majority of clients are gradually getting used to marketing tricks and deceitful intentions immersed in the advertisement. To illustrate, many products are terrible and do not live up to people's expectations compared to those introduced on televisions, triggering outrageous reactions and distrust for the companies as well as diminishing manufacturer's social reputation.
Furthermore, since many marketing strategies are directing towards children, which can have a debilitating effect on their health. It goes without saying that many fast food and junk food companies are choosing children as their target audience, hence, those companies have a tendency to make their products appear to be healthy and appealing to children. Unfortunately, most children do not understand the concept of advertising and are easily persuaded to purchase these unhealthy food. As a consequence, children can be at risk of many serious health issues, such as obesity and diabetes.
In conclusion, although advertising are gaining more popular to the public, I am of the opinion that it can bring detrimental impacts in terms of children's health, people's dissatisfaction about obsolete methodology and marketing tricks of commercials.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... used in advertisements, which leads to peoples dissatisfaction and disappointment. To ...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fast food', 'a good deal of fast food'.
Suggestion: much fast food; a good deal of fast food
...eir health. It goes without saying that many fast food and junk food companies are choosing ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94382022472 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46532835532 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4450255256 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.272727273 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159249792938 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731360685947 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813037240242 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126372866659 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883634122639 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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