Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
The number of advertisements has been increasing in many forms lately. Personally, I argue that advertising can benefit people by giving useful solutions to improve their life but can sometimes make them buy unnecessities.
On the one hand, advertisements provide very useful options when people want to purchase something. Specifically, by analysing customer behaviour, many companies nowadays have various insights to help people solve their daily life’s problems and they will show potential customers suitable products to consider. For example, when people have problems with their hair such as dandruff, they may then search for solutions on the search engine and various shampoo companies will reach these potential customers by giving them appropriate product’s information. Therefore, people can thoughtfully choose suitable products to address their issues.
On the other hand, I also believe that the advertising industry can tempt people to make unnecessary purchases. This is because profit is definitely the priority of any business and they can even provide their products’ details to people who do not need it. With the constant rate of advertisements’ appearance, people may buy products to not solve any specific problem of themselves. As a result, they might feel regret because of wasting their money on unnecessities for just a careless moment.
In conclusion, I think that advertisements can have both benefits when they can help people to purchase the appropriate things but they can also have a negative impact of making them try unnecessary stuff.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57438016529 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05083235106 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4848147774 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625287768434 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306942703875 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251824027401 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502953228124 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240172822607 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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