No doubt, over the last few years, the tendency of watching films has increased significantly among people almost throughout the world. However, it has become an issue of debate that most people rather like to watch Hollywood movies than Bollywood movies. Further, this essay will shed a light on the causes that why it is happening and according to my perspective financial support is a must for the local film industry.
There are certain factors that need to be considered behind the popularity of foreign films. Firstly, overseas films are believed to have a higher quality in terms of visual and audio, since sophisticated cameras are used in order to enhance the digital effects; consequently, it leads to more preference among the people. Secondly, foreign film industries tend to spend high budgets on films, and therefore, the talented actors and actresses are selected for the production of films, even they choose the developed nations for taking the scenes, which help to incline the quality of movies.
The implementation of possible solutions seems to be effective for overcoming this problem, the first and foremost is financial support as without money the usage of latest technology is not feasible for improving the sight and sound of movies; hence, the government should have to allocate funds for the progression of the local film industry. Besides this, each country has some talented producers, actors, and actresses, but they have a lack of financial and political support, so high authority is supposed to give them a chance to prove themselves.
In conclusion, although foreign movies are preferred in each country, yet the local film industry needs to be supported financially to raise the quality of local movies as well as the economy of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15862068966 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74020577788 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4371472377 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.222222222 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349318215438 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125268007944 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661637872521 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199586816303 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655737618516 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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