The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place tp find information about what is happening in the world. I think this trend will continue, and the Internet will soon be just as important as the traditional ones.
On the one hand, I believe that newspapers will remain to be the most important source of information. Firstly, not everyone can use from the internet. For example, people who live in rural areas are not able to ase the Internet due to low Internet speed. Older people do not use the Internet even if they do have Internet access. Secondly, newspapers can be trusted as reliable source of news because they employ professional journalists and editors. Finally, a computer screen is harmful for eyes of person.
On the other hand, the Internet has got a lot of preferences over newspapers. One of them is that it allows us much faster access to news in real time and wherever we are. Moreover, people can share the news to their friends and discuss them with other people. Furthermore, everyone can be a bloger on social media such as YouTube.
In conclusion, I believe that the Internet will be basic source of news and newspapers will choosen by few people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65257424928 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6958276279 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6923076923 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275909874597 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920095235421 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606005320162 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165310547325 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697156577988 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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