Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It can not be denied that online news is an indispensable part of life in this digital age nowadays. However, many traditionalists argued that newspapers should still be maintained as the most major sources of information. I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are variety of reasons why online news become popular but the high speed and convenience of the Internet can be considered as the main determined factors. The Internet is able to provide an enormous free and up-to-the-minute information, which covers almost the aspects of life from economic to politic, from local to global. Moreover, the accessibility of the Internet allows people to approach the news sources easily no matter where they are and what they do. For instance, whether we are in a meeting in the city center or in a holiday in rural area, we still can connect to the Internet, surf the websites and update the chosen news across the world.
In contrast, the newspapers contains many disadvantages which lead to its less usage in the modern life. The first reason is that reading newspapers is costly. It is unreasonable that we have to pay for the information that is public widely and freely in the Internet. Additionally, the conventional newspapers is sometimes repeated and out of date. Another reason for its drawback is environmental concerns which relate to the using of natural resources in producing papers and its waste. In fact, many newspapers publishers have deeply understood the difficulties that they have to face with and decided to announce online versions alongside with the traditional printed editions as a campaign to keep up with the modern trend.
In conclusion, I accepted that newspapers still play a certain role in the traditionalist life. But I would argue that online news will continue to develop and replace for the newspapers as more and more people will rely on the Internet to access the news resources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94337630248 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6975344568 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275164603941 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826505027029 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933425110185 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173339493004 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102466108111 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.