Advertisements bring many negative effects on people and the society. What are these effects? How to solve this problem?
The numbers of advertising are blooming in various forms of social media channel in the modern societies. Although it is undoubted that there are considerable negative influences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate potential issues.
With the aims to sell the brand image and persuade people to buy products, advertising may provide incorrect and exaggerated product information which may lead to serious related problems as a result. For example, people who suffer a chronic headache, instead of going to healthcare check, they trusty buy an over-advertised item which is not only useless but also worsen the situation. Additionally, advertisement manipulates people and negatively affects customer’s consumption behaviours. Actually, under the magnetism of advertising with eye-catching images and successful brand representations, audiences are easily persuaded to the lasted trends and have a tendency toward excessed consumption for wasted kinds of stuff. Additionally, children are also affected and they sometimes pressure their parents to buy them things according to the allure of advertisements.
However, there are several measures that societies could take to tackle the problems that mentioned above. Firstly, advertising should be regulated by laws and penalty forms. Businesses must be forced to provide exact information, which is especially related to product’s ingredients and functions. Secondly, children-aimed advertising, which indirectly influences children behavioural building process, have to be strictly controlled. For instance, advertisings which contain violent images and improper manner characters should no doubt be banned. More importantly, ministries are taken responsibility for ensuring carefully verified of healthy products before allowing to public advertisements and it is necessary to prohibit advertisings of harmful items such as cigarette or unhealthy foods.
To sum up, various solutions can be applied to alleviate the problems which are linked to the raising of advertisings in the developed societies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03378378378 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33084808132 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64527027027 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7046378159 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131190743259 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469979171424 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356706969581 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801465654216 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170826193565 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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