It is universally acknowledged that the progress of advertising can trigger some impacts on humans and society. I hold a firm conviction that there are several negative effects are attributed to advertisement and measures should be implemented.
It is undeniable that because of the demand for increasing profit, advertisement is the culprit of some serious consequences for both consumers as well as society. The first negative effect is that in order to promote commodities, a lot of companies distort the truth about their products. To illustrate, in the fierce competition in marketplaces, instead of providing reliable products’ information, companies try to exaggerate functions, benefits of goods to arouse viewers’ desire to buy them, which results in wrong decisions of customers. Secondly, in terms of society, in order to court media publicity, firms or agencies produce immodest and provocative ads. Indeed, in the technology age, there are a wide variety ways to promote products via mass media, so a lot of ads have violent and pornographic contents, especially online game ads, are popularise on the Internet, therefore, young generation may mimic these bad behavior and crime rate may be increased.
Hence, both individuals and governments should take some immediate steps to resolve these harmful effects. First of all, because people can no diminish the development of advertising, so individuals should try to become smart consumers. If people do not solely depend on information on ads and spend more time on finding useful information about goods via other people and the Internet, they may not be deceived by advertisements. An additional measure is that governments should impose censorship on advertisements’ contents. Owing to the strict monitoring of censorship, authorities can limit the number of ads has immodest contents, in the long run, this step can reduce the crime rate, especially teenagers.
In conclusion, despite the fact that advertisement can cause negative influences for customers and society. I believe that individuals and governments can tackle these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...serious consequences for both consumers as well as society. The first negative effect is t...
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Line 3, column 862, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'popularised'.
Suggestion: popularised
...ntents, especially online game ads, are popularise on the Internet, therefore, young gener...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57716049383 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29818430926 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0437570749 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177051008722 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620212793049 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465310809745 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121473306113 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431055979305 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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