The process illustrates how plastics are treated after using.
In general, it is evident from the diagram that, there are two main ways to treat plastic waste, including: putting in a landfill and recycling them.
As can be seen from the diagram, the lengthy program of throwing away garbage in a landfill contains 3 steps. At the first stage of the progress, consumers buy plastic items in shops and use them. Regarding plastic bags and rubbish, after using, waste is put into trash bins or littered in the ground. After that, these kinds of stuff are put to the landfill.
Look at the process in more detail, if waste is plastic bottles, after using, these empty bottles can be recycled with 5 main steps. First of all, the bottles are collected. It is then carried to sorting houses. Subsequently, the plastics are transported by truck to the factories where these bottles are recycled in order to reuse. The final is when recyclable products after being manufactured are delivered to shops.
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- IELTS writing task 1 the recycling process of plastics 60
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- Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, then, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51745463806 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6314931737 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199915219976 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742091504199 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675867528816 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136937205672 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512043099544 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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