the two maps compare the changes of a community center
The maps illustrate the development of a community center.
In general, it is evident from the maps that the most change taking place in the community center is the construction of a car park and a reception.
As can be seen in a car park area, a garden which was located on the bottom left-hand corner of the community area has been demolished. The car park was widened in order to have more space for parking.
Look to an inside of the building in more detail, two meeting rooms have been retained on the top left-hand corner of the area. An art room and an IT room which are to the east of the meeting rooms have been reconstructed. Meanwhile, a cafe’ and a gym were sited on the left-hand side of the community center zone have been flattened to make way for the erection of a reception and the expansion of the IT room.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...and corner of the area. An art room and an IT room which are to the east of the meeti...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rooms'?
Suggestion: rooms
...rner of the area. An art room and an IT room which are to the east of the meeting ro...
^^^^
Line 7, column 405, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ion of a reception and the expansion of the IT room.
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Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rooms'?
Suggestion: rooms
...a reception and the expansion of the IT room.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42580645161 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61824225537 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5210337816 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212380370114 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124649629884 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139366628232 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195506768602 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144622456448 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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