IELTS writing task 1 the recycling process of plastics
The diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastics. It is clear from the diagram that there are six main stages in the reproduction of plastics, beginning with selling plastic products and ending with delivering finished products to shops.
The process begins with people purchase things like bottles and something is contained in bags and rubbish. After that, while bags and rubbish are thrown away and brought to landfill, bottles are collected for recycling purposes.
In the next stage of the process, bottles that are collected are delivered to a place called sorting house. The process continues with those bottles are transported by a truck to a factory. Following this, at this place, the recycling process of plastic happen and in this process, the factory emits carbon dioxide into the air. The final stage of the process is that the finished products manufactured from the factory are delivered to shops to sell.
Comments
The given pictorial
The given pictorial representation reveals the two modes of dealing with plastic wastage, either recycling or dumping them in landfill sites.
Overall, it can be seen that the recycling process has six stages, which are more complex than the landfill process that has only three steps.
In the case of the landfill process, the customers buy plastic products from the shops and use them. Next, after using the products, the customers put them into waste bins or litter them on the ground. The plastic waste is then collected and dumped into a landfill site.
The recycling process begins with plastic products being bought and used. They are then brought to recycling collecting points. After sorting them out in the warehouses, they are loaded on trucks to be transported to the processing facilities. At these facilities, they are made into new products. The recycling process repeats itself after having these products distributed to the retail agencies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20529801325 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58048802913 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9354890742 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209890622358 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101468081124 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660184839555 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137235927041 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492942218434 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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