IELTS writing task 1 the recycling process of plastics

This diagram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are various stages of recycling process. These stage involves purchasing, settling the waste in containers,collecting all of plastic waste from soil and transporting to the plastic industry and finally the product is ready for use and supplies in the market.
Firstly, an individual from the community buy any product, however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in container fixed by the municipal organization. Infact, plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste products and loaded the raw materials into the truck. Trucks transport the raw materials to the industry. Theses products after passing through the several process which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and finally pellet are prepared. These pellet are purchased by the textile,toy,fiber and utensils industry, where the found product and hence it is finally supplied in the market

Votes
Average: 5.6 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of pl...
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Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so ...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are variou...
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Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are various stages...
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Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...trate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are various stages of recyclin...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rocess of plastic ,so there are various stages of recycling process. These stag...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o there are various stages of recycling process. These stage involves purchasing...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , collecting
...hasing, settling the waste in containers,collecting all of plastic waste from soil and tran...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plastic waste from soil and transporting to the plastic industry and finally the...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to the plastic industry and finally the product is ready for use and suppli...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dustry and finally the product is ready for use and supplies in the market. F...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e product is ready for use and supplies in the market. Firstly, an individual ...
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Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... in the market. Firstly, an individual from the community buy any product, how...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rstly, an individual from the community buy any product, however after consumpti...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y any product, however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in c...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in container fix...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in container fixe...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...l organization. Infact, plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste ...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion. Infact, plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste products a...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste products and loaded the...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te products and loaded the raw materials into the truck. Trucks transport the raw...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ruck. Trucks transport the raw materials to the industry. Theses products after p...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... industry. Theses products after passing through the several process which inclu...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... Theses products after passing through the several process which include breaki...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: 'several processes'.
Suggestion: several processes
...es products after passing through the several process which include breaking,putting bottles...
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Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , putting
...e several process which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by m...
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Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l process which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by mac...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...reaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and finally pellet ...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...utting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and finally pellet are prepa...
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Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntainer ,crushed by machine and finally pellet are prepared. These pellet are pu...
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Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , toy
...hese pellet are purchased by the textile,toy,fiber and utensils industry, where the...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ed by the textile,toy,fiber and utensils industry, where the found product and he...
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Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he found product and hence it is finally supplied in the market
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69863013699 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14000572519 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9926525214 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 1.69756097561 2003% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170439484188 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883019765977 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121283068086 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164278049836 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100613628564 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of pl...
^^
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so ...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This diagram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are variou...
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Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agram illustrate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are various stages...
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Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...trate the recycling process of plastic ,so there are various stages of recyclin...
^^
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rocess of plastic ,so there are various stages of recycling process. These stag...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o there are various stages of recycling process. These stage involves purchasing...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , collecting
...hasing, settling the waste in containers,collecting all of plastic waste from soil and tran...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plastic waste from soil and transporting to the plastic industry and finally the...
^^
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to the plastic industry and finally the product is ready for use and suppli...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dustry and finally the product is ready for use and supplies in the market. F...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e product is ready for use and supplies in the market. Firstly, an individual ...
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Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... in the market. Firstly, an individual from the community buy any product, how...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rstly, an individual from the community buy any product, however after consumpti...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y any product, however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in c...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in container fix...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., however after consumption of product ,the garbage is throwed in container fixe...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l organization. Infact, plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste ...
^^
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion. Infact, plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste products a...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... plastic industry separate the plastic from other waste products and loaded the...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te products and loaded the raw materials into the truck. Trucks transport the raw...
^^
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ruck. Trucks transport the raw materials to the industry. Theses products after p...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... industry. Theses products after passing through the several process which inclu...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Theses products after passing through the several process which include breaki...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: 'several processes'.
Suggestion: several processes
...es products after passing through the several process which include breaking,putting bottles...
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Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , putting
...e several process which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by m...
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Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l process which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by mac...
^^
Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which include breaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...reaking,putting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and finally pellet ...
^^
Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utting bottles into container ,crushed by machine and finally pellet are prepa...
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Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntainer ,crushed by machine and finally pellet are prepared. These pellet are pu...
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Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , toy
...hese pellet are purchased by the textile,toy,fiber and utensils industry, where the...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by the textile,toy,fiber and utensils industry, where the found product and he...
^^
Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he found product and hence it is finally supplied in the market
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69863013699 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14000572519 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9926525214 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 1.69756097561 2003% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170439484188 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883019765977 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121283068086 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164278049836 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100613628564 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.