In recent times, world has become a global village, indeed to reduce the ratio of poverty technical education will be a fruitful path to attain the propriety. No doubt, due to the latest invention in science and technology during the last three decade technical education had became a crucial part of our world.
Since, researchers found out a thesis on the employment rate in the world, this would might be a shocking factor that almost 50 percent of our job are related to technical industry.IT industry played a significant role in the modern era, providing latest computers,software,machines,new source of energy, in short all of these terms are related to technical education. In my opinion, I am also the student of b. Tech honour's (in civil engineering) Infact there are lot of jobs available all around the world for me,upto Me I would recommend government should build up technicall institute, providing training among the latest methodology of handling different products related to the all aspect of life. Finally, technically education seems as much important as like a food for our body
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, in short, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10555555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3527720243 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.744570307 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.166666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413078053564 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229677126121 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240969835138 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389569016084 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220490725419 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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