Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In present decades, technology becomes too vast and plenty of advancements are come via science innovations and software technology also includes in that. Therefore, by followed this, although there are numerous softwares which are available for translation of languages. However, learning of language becomes more beneficial. Thus, I agree with this notion, yet I also shed some light on opposite side. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, advancement of technology plays pivotal role in modern era. Although, innovations become maximize with time, yet there are numerous merits which are in favour of learning language skills due to their huge positive impressions. First and foremost reason is proliferation of knowledge and advanced information. Because, in this criteria, if individuals show their keen interest to learn foreign tongues. Thus, this becomes lead toward progression of nation. Because, employees become able to communicate with foreign agents. Due to which, they would become expand their business sector which shows superior impression of that nation on others. As a result, this leads toward economic and business development. Moreover, another factor is learning of foreign culture. Because, if masses gain knowledge regards communication skill thus they also become in contact with culture, diversity and society rules of that foreign nation. Due to which, this also shows positive flash on their thinking. For instance, many individuals learn english tongue which includes probably western culture. Thus, masses become keen towards that diversity which depicts superior image in accordance to their personality, public impression and thinking. Because, they become open minded and avoid discrimination between genders, class, religion or so on. As a result, their positive image depicts in front of public which boosts their personality factor and impression in front of them.
On contrast, although, learning communication skills become too advantageous. However, there are number of translation softwares which are available for that. Due to which, this leads toward preservation of time. Because, in present era, every individual stuck in their busy hectic schedule due to race of challanges of modern years. Thus, they avoid learning skills and prefer computer softwares for such practices which conserve their time and easily available.
To recapitulate, it seems to me as, although, there are plethora of favourable aspects of learning communication skills which includes information regards foreign countries, their diversity, culture and so on. Yet, this also shows drawbacks which is wastage of time in technological eras.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72817955112 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85600511103 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7023051018 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0740740741 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8518518519 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59259259259 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096759447137 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347397258453 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493369275087 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847846243917 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462448220433 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.36 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.