Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, language translation program has gained popularity worldwide, and the requirement for language ability is being increased over many years. From my perspective, I totally agree that learning a new language will be more beneficial for individuals and this essay will explain my belief.
To begin with, it is undeniable that being a multi lingua person will be more advantageous in a myriad of fields. In terms of its benefits, a person who is well-performed in many languages will obtain an offer of high-wage positions than others who are not. For example, many recruiters nowadays are in favor of employees who are capable of communicating over 2 languages which are excepted mother tongue. Thus, plenty of marvelous opportunities will be opened for multi-lingual people. Additionally, it is believed that learning a new language is a great way to step into someone’s heart. Communicating with a foreigner in their languages will make a deep impression on their minds. To illustrates, my friend, who could speak Germany fluently, had a great chance to make friends with German people.
The language translation system is becoming well known in terms of its convenience and flexibility. Which is useful in the finding meaning of words and translating the sentences in the basic ways. For instance, most students learning languages commonly translate the sentences into their mother tongue to understand deeply about it.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that learning a new language is becoming more and more beneficial in the innovative society, which brings people a large number of merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...innovative society, which brings people a large number of merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04176062377 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3720801042 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180413354499 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667613519308 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340250190836 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110612592745 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035252550627 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.