An American film actor John Wayne once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. How is it important for individuals and societies to think about the future than focusing on the present only?
It is believed that people should appreciate the future over the present and should always live towards the future. Although I agree that lives may not be so meaningful without passions, and ambitions, I also think that the present is particularly incomparable.
There are many reasons why it is crucial to be farsighted, but in my opinion, it is simply because the future is unpredictable. This means that every individual stands a high chance of facing challenges throughout their lifetime, and therefore making a meticulously-outlined plan acts as a roadmap and guidance for life as it helps to minimize unexpected consequences. This can be perfectly exemplified by success stories such as Bill Gates or Elon Musk who have efficient marketing strategies being planned even years before launching their new products into the market. Additionally, we, as human beings, not only live for ourselves but also have a responsibility to take care of our birth-givers and offspring. The preparation for their retirement and adulthood is reflected in the expenses including tuition fees, medical care, and other recreational activities. Without a contingency plan, they may not feel a sense of purpose and direction, having no goals and dreams to strive toward as a result. Hence, devising a future scheme can be considered the matter of life or death.
However, people, in general, should not underestimate the present because they only live once in a lifetime. If they place too much emphasis on planning for the forthcoming time by sacrificing all of their time working, it is possible that they miss out on many important life events each passing moment. A husband, for instance, may not be able to remember his wife’s birthday, or a child may take for granted their elderly parents’ health, and when they realize that they have lost the simple but so precious things in life, it is all too late. One more thing is that everyone is entitled to enjoy every moment of life, so apart from making a living, it is extremely important to be self-loved. This can be done by having a hearty meal with the family on the weekend or treating ourselves to meaningful gifts or holidays on special occasions. It is these moments that make our future.
To conclude, due to the aforementioned reasons, I believe that it is vital for one to ensure his living standards. At the same time, he should also develop sensible strategies for the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in general, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84496124031 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85210456752 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545219638243 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5939580565 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169347515081 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503865006899 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365595176763 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100409421303 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032960179501 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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