The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.
What are the reasons and solutions?
Due to human actions, wildlife species living on land and in sea are confronting the extinction. To fulfill human's daily necessities is an origin of this problem , while issuing a specific regulation related animal protection become a problem solving.
The expansion of humans' day-to-day fundamental needs such as for meat stock is a main reason from the opportunity of animal extinction is rising. This is because the human population keeps to increase year by year affecting the demand of fresh meat consumption has had the similar trend as well. consequently, both fishermen and hunters willingly catch more game animals to fulfill the market demand in order to boost their earnings. A WWF (World Wildlife Funding) 2016 reported that Blue Whale was in red list of threatened species because of high-level hunt particularly in Japanese territories. The reason is that consuming Whale's meat is a traditional culture of the local residents, and the population of this nation's citizen is one of the biggest number in the world. If this condition remains to continue annually, this creature will extinct eventually.
What is the solution to tackle this matter? Round-the-world leader nations should meet and issue international agreements governing the protection of animals' life. Those laws suppose to describe rules about the limitation of catch number in one hunting or sail, categorize animals allowed to hunt or not, and punishment procedure for the offenders. As a result, the population and lifespan can be safeguarded and watched based on applicable laws. For example, the limitation of hunting salmon is under control by Norwegian authorities in their areas. A big ship can maximally catch 10,000 kg , while the small one is permitted to bring 4,500 kg. Hence, the existence of this fish can be preserved
In conclusion, the rise of animal extinction possibility is an effect from the identical trend of humans' fundamental needs. So that, a cross-country regulation suppose to be made as the solution offered. It is advocated that each country should take a part to concern on this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25222551929 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94963421021 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3700015385 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240086823507 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667090955967 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075451807276 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142335128686 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760279767764 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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