Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas.
Why is this?
What problems does this cause?
Living in city neighbors is being emphasized by people nowadays, though major population show grater enthusiasm to live in urban areas rather than rural as well. This is because not only there are considerable number of job opportunities but also does better transportation system in cities can be seen obviously. Despite many more advantages further to what said before, this issue is followed by some problems as well which is going to be extended in detail in this essay.
Wide range of job positions and higher minimum wages are tend to be like reinforced reasons to push a big population every day start their life in big cities, the more number of habitants is exceeding, the more traffic and relevant pollutions will be emerged drastically.
Further more, gathering diverse types of back grounds and customs also habits in a place will end up in cultural inconsistency and disorders which is not favorable by anyone and could be a basis cause for extra irregularities that come into surface in society and it has to be treated by related specialists in order to maintain solutions to this issue properly. However having a rapid accessibility and accomplishment to any modern criteria and equipment is a right for every individual in current years and we have to put it into consideration that normally this interaction would happen in civil districts and enlarged regions.
In conclusion, in spite of many difficulties people have faced with ,to live in developed and modern urban neighbors is a globally preferred tendency, so that they insist on it. Then, the majority of governors and related researchers developers and organizations should prioritize the encountered disorders and plan practical solutions for them to improve the quality of life in such areas in different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12969283276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96769013006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3631746678 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.875 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25243811002 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986638814194 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611951571592 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133071060778 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859971358772 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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