The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The average health of human beings is declining which can be seen by the far-reaching effects of this Covid-19. WHO, the health organization clearly reports that individuals with a low immune system are affected the most. The highest death rates have been claimed in areas where people are less exposed to a healthy living style. Instead, they were more occupied by technology, junk food, and poor hygienic conditions as well. This clearly implies that the average standard of people’s health will be adversely affected in the future as well if the right measures are not taken timely.
After this pandemic has hit the world, now most of the individuals are positively worried about their health. People have started taking necessary precautions along with following the government set protocol. Exercise, home-made food, consumption of water instead of juices, and intake of a good amount of vitamin C can help us to combat the problem at hand. If I was answering this question before COVID, I would have sided a decline in the future health of human beings, however, now there is a shift in the approach and understanding. During the lockdown, various people uploading videos show that they exercise, eat well, sleep better, also their health is their top priority. This means that everyone with a low immune system is at risk, which can only be fought with a good diet, and a vigorous routine.
Initially, my friends, siblings, and I were not very conscious of our falling health and threat and risks affiliated with it. Especially my siblings took it easy. Whereas now, most of us have set daily routines to exercise, maintain good hygienic conditions, and follow a well-balanced food intake. I have set hours for work-out and to strengthen my lungs, I also plan to become an early riser to breathe in fresh oxygenated air.
Hence, I assume and predict by looking at the news information, social media influx, and all the random discussions with my friends and relatives that the health of those individuals with a goal to survive will have better health standards.
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- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language 11
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “WHO” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... far-reaching effects of this Covid-19. WHO, the health organization clearly report...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, then, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9855907781 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64983984525 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599423631124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2828551986 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16787338461 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549617114846 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466776646515 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991041350673 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458091825389 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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