The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that the traffic congestion should be addressed by supply free daily and hourly transportation. Although, there are many advantages of this trend, I totally disagree with this view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why public transports could bring benefit.
Firstly, the introduction of bus and train would help to ease private vehicles on the road, which is the main cause of the high density of traffic on roads. There are more drivers and not enough roads to absorb them all. Secondly, using public transportation is also safer than private means, so it helps to minimize traffic accidents, which leads to hour of traffic congestion. In HaNoi, for example, where the streets are crowded and quite narrow, it takes hours to solve when traffic accident happen on the road.
On the other hand, I believe that public transport should not be free. A main reason is that free public transport will be a burden to the government. The government may not have enough budget to cover higher priority issues such as health and education. Another reason is that it can affect the economy of some industries like car sales, taxi,.. Free public transport means that people use fewer cars or taxis, as a result, car manufactures and service providers are in danger of closing, many worker may lose their jobs.
In conclusion, the advantages of increasing public transport use are obvious, however I believe that the effects of making entire public systems free are much more disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03174603175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59253050352 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5076204169 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209230577796 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06999028526 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454501021296 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102943991017 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215038371109 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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