The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic accident is, I firmly believe, a controversial issue in every society, either developing countries or advanced ones. The question is, however, whether safe driving education courses for unexperienced young drivers can reduce the number of accidents or not. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, am advocate of the former approach.
Granted, untrained people, from a logical viewpoint, create a number of difficulties in driving and safety. The most important and essential point that come through our mind in first glance is that the vast number of accidents trigger by inexpert drivers who suffer from lack of knowledge and skills in driving, thus traffic congestion will be increase. As we can clearly see the statics and news reveal that the number of accidents as well as the risk of death ascend among people, especially among juveniles. Also, we should contend that accidents can bring numerous financial obstacles too. Hence, if we wish to put an end on this danger, we should educate them through practical courses.
On the other hand, driving course are not just summarized on how drive the car, but also, there are some advises that assist you to how control your feeling such as stress, fear and so on. For instance, as we know most of the people become anxious when they stuck in the traffic. Therefore, they lose their confident and in most cases stop driving and negatively impact on traffic. In order to tackle with this issues young drivers should participate in driving courses to prepare yourself either physical or emotional. In contrast it is true that people have to spend bulk of time and currency on these courses that may be not affordable for everyone.
All things considered, although you should dedicate part of your time and budget on driving courses, I wholeheartedly would reaffirm that the blessing of the courses outweigh and outnumber its drawbacks, particularly in terms of well training in educational and psychological aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in most cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09509202454 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69365153478 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622699386503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8165602114 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.642857143 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289829149878 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877542492634 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709274796515 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163774979666 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451532262369 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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