The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable fact that in this era it is vitally important to maintain traffic instruments. Traffic accident had occured usually because of some youth who actually not readily taking driving courses yet even legitimate licensed by authorities. I personally accept this issue as an argument of mine, therefore I would elaborate some points of view in this following paragrahps.

Traffic accidents could be happened not only cause by lack of traffic safety tools, but also youth not readily enough to ride a vehicle such as motorbike, car, or etc. Pivotal things that people would consider as a prime condition to allow someone to take responsible of driving is a people who have legitimation to drive. Presently, youth as well-known vulnerable age because of not mature yet to take some risk and almost delinquencies dangerous. One of salient solutions of this issue is youth that finish their driving courses. Youth capability to drive will increase and diminish some drawbacks of traffic accident even to prevent an undesiable situation.

However, driving courses posses a great deal of virtues absolutely before being licensed, although requirement of driving license might be considered to create safety and unaware of accidents. Highly specification of license would be fill by youth if want to drive. Considerably situation of real highway is extremenly dangerous. With less practice it will vulnerable to take a ride in a street. In order to control and reduce of numerous pathetic accidents.

To sum up, I reaffirm my position of agreeing of youth must practice and finish driving courses as well as being safety to ride on a road. Highly recommended to being licensed must be in safety and confident to drive.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t also youth not readily enough to ride an vehicles such as motorbike, car, or etc...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an vehicle' or simply 'vehicles'?
Suggestion: an vehicle; vehicles
...t also youth not readily enough to ride an vehicles such as motorbike, car, or etc. Pivotal...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a street' or simply 'streets'?
Suggestion: a street; streets
...ce it will vulnerable to take a ride in a streets. In order to control and reduce of nume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19285714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86960674259 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.108312217 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23777783198 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826951926995 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674616331831 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15699386873 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384255115147 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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