We, mankind reached top in the world in terms of education and technologies, still one of the burning issue exists is crime, irrespective of nation and population. There observed an increasing trend in crimes committed by youth all over the world. Some people belives that if parents have good idea about parental skills, it will be beneficial to the youth; I completely agree with the statement as parents are the first teachers of a child.
Recent centuries witnessed an exponential growth in technology and life style,
along with people shows a criminal mentality, especially the youth. This may be resulted from the need of money to fullfill the growing needs or spending lavishly and even because of inspiration from movies and social media. Yungsters are concerned about fasion and life style, besides they are reluctant to adjustments in life. Nowadays, a lot of money is needed for daily life, studies ,healthcare and so on; failing in acquiring necessary life style creates people criminal. Moreover social media, television and movies change the perception of the youngsters, it will take them in to another diamention from the real world.
As I mentioned early, the parents are the best teachers, hence they should be taught parenting skills effectively. A child should get information about right and wrong from home, starting from very early, which will make him a responsible citizen. Parents should monitor the activities of a child and promote good deeds and discourage the bad. Recent researches conducted by W H O, clearly defines that children from "problem family" are often turned to involve in crimes. A family with both parents are working, often child are left uncared, which makes the child feeling in secured, those are more viable to commit bad to society. Family is responsible to take care of the needs of children and guide them properly, give education if necessary and give punishments when needed.
In short, empowering the parents to take care of the kids properly will give better results, definitely it will aid in crime reduction up to an extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1195335277 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72865427425 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600583090379 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0092048362 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166829465054 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554546404966 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746481859543 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903065825014 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818026436811 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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