Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that getting highly paid is more important than job satisfaction. I partially agree that a big salary is necessary to live happily, but prioritizing the job makes us willing to work is much more crucial.
Firstly, I agree that one of the most important things in our work life is a high salary. Since the cost of everything becomes more expensive as time passes. A big amount of money means a lot for some people. In other words, Every employee working hard expects to get more revenue. When we gain more income, we will have a good quality of facilities and we will have a better life. However, But money is not the most important factor to consider about work.
However, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more important than high wages. Some people say that even if you are forced to do the job you are good at, you will start to like it. On the contrary, many people have anxiety problems when they work in a too competitive and stressful working atmosphere. These days, more and more people decide to quit the job and work as a freelancer even though it is not a secure and highly paid job. This is because they are not satisfied with the previous job or they find something they truly want to do. from the evidence above, working depends on the suitability of you and the job more than the salary.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement to a great extent. It cannot be refused that money is important for our work and life, however, job satisfaction is of more importance than the amount of money getting paid for a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ings in our work life is a high salary. Since the cost of everything becomes more exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51929824561 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48150809496 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2873026028 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385716383386 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122337992134 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842190432885 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243863734337 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810078556684 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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