Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
These day buying things from the internet have become common since materialism has gained the popularity and shopping is leisure time activity. This essay would discuss shopping at an ease as an advantage and then cases of internet fraudulent activity as a disadvantage.
Firstly, Shopping from internet helps to provide a better choice and the opportunity to people choose and buy any things what they want in a less rate and it also gives the facility to collect their order from their house and any other place where they want after filling the formalities of that online site it also provide the air or train ticket on a cheapest rate if anybody books before one month.
Secondly, sometimes online product comes in a worst condition and it happens when online site show something else and gives another else it is because they look very nice on the portal; however, when it comes in front of people it look bad. Same things happen in booking when people want to go urgently sometimes its show the cost of ticket expensive and most of the people are interested to buy groceries from the internet but they don’t know sometimes its date will expire and its gives harm to their body.
In Conclusion, people have their own choice where they want to buy and
Either online or offline shopping because every people have their own thinking it is totally about satisfaction every people wants excellence things who spent money on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day buying things from the internet have be...
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Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...formalities of that online site it also provide the air or train ticket on a cheapest r...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...also provide the air or train ticket on a cheapest rate if anybody books before o...
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Line 11, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ndly, sometimes online product comes in a worst condition and it happens when onl...
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Line 11, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...er, when it comes in front of people it look bad. Same things happen in booking when...
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Line 11, column 445, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: sometimes know
...s from the internet but they don't know sometimes its date will expire and its gives harm...
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Line 15, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir own choice where they want to buy and Either online or offline shopping becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90688259109 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37384409758 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7182757528 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.0 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147690057092 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086012049262 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589771387163 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863926083688 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676311102996 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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